It hops from one face of the tunnel to another
You can see it trickling down from her cheek
It hits you the moment you see her ;the vibes can make you uncomfortable
Ah! and they complain she never spoke what she went through; she never spoke of her pain
They fuss they din't know;they fuss they couldnot care
I say if you couldnot hear the sound of silence;you will never be able to hear the words
She has gone through a lot in life;her half burnt face speaks about it
The questions about her life is piercing her;she stands still
She choose to be silent coz she didnot want to go through the pain of uttering it all over again i guess
I believe the silence was loud enough to understand; silence was calm enough to pinch;silence was deep enough to freeze
But guess some people only listen to words; they can not listen to the silence...
You can see it trickling down from her cheek
It hits you the moment you see her ;the vibes can make you uncomfortable
Ah! and they complain she never spoke what she went through; she never spoke of her pain
They fuss they din't know;they fuss they couldnot care
I say if you couldnot hear the sound of silence;you will never be able to hear the words
She has gone through a lot in life;her half burnt face speaks about it
The questions about her life is piercing her;she stands still
She choose to be silent coz she didnot want to go through the pain of uttering it all over again i guess
I believe the silence was loud enough to understand; silence was calm enough to pinch;silence was deep enough to freeze
But guess some people only listen to words; they can not listen to the silence...
It is very intense.... I hope this isnt your alter ego because you are a happy soul and I hope you always stay that way :PPPP
ReplyDeleterealy you are free as you write !
ReplyDeletehow it likes so
you want to more......
wow!
ReplyDeleteu r a poet too..
i loved the last line specially:
"But guess some people only listen to words; they can not listen to the silence..."
please write often!!
Thanks for your comments Vikas.. Really appreciate it:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Mel...
ReplyDeletei liked what u wrote here... keep posting surabhi...
ReplyDeleteThanks Atul!
ReplyDeletebest of what I have read so far
ReplyDeleteVery well written..
ReplyDeletethanks Karsten & Amit...
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